Blood Veins
Brian Young
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REVIEW:
It's Raining Books Review:
"This author has a way of making his characters come to life so that you can really get to know them and begin to understand their reasons for doing what they are doing. He even made the bad guys real and helped you understand them also. Sometimes I wanted to stop reading because I had things to do, or because I wanted to prolong the story, but I also wanted to know what was really going on and how it would end.
Then, more than halfway through the story, I found out something very significant about this strange world and just what it really was. It made the story even more exciting. This book has the feel of a movie with vivid descriptions, exciting plot and a cast of interesting characters that I truly cared about. I can't wait for the next book in the series!
I give this book a 4 flower rating."
BLURB:
A black wave of terror has
passed over the thriving kingdom of Larista. Mysterious invaders have swept
over the land, laying waste to everything in their path and leaving ghost towns
in their wake. No one knows where they came from and no one knows their
purpose.
Tasting nothing but defeat
after defeat after, the light of hope is fading in the kingdom; but the
guerilla forces resisting the invasion have received new information. The news
has provided a small glimmer that could possibly spark into something more.
Captain Maximus Rex leads a daring rescue mission deep in the Laristan forests
to save the lone surviving member of the royal family.
Once freed, Prince Alexander
Novelle, along with his friends and comrades, face a perilous journey deep
behind enemy lines. Their destination is Castle Varanasi. The once proud
Laristan capital, gateway to heaven and salvation, lines in ruins under Dolus
occupation.
Mysterious assassins,
underworld savages and renegade Dolus survivors stand between them and the
answers they seek. What they find there will shatter their perceptions and lead
to unknown perils none of them are ready to face.
EXCERPT:
Maximus and Percival couldn't have looked any different. Maximus
had brown eyes and raven black hair. His face was weathered and rugged with a
distinguished long nose. A small white scar on his left cheek marked where the
tip of a sword had nearly taken his eye. Percival, on the other hand, showed no
signs of the burdens the two men had shared. He had a smooth complexion
unmarred by the usual signs of a soldier's life. Wide eyes and a small nose
framed his face. Some people said he was so handsome he was almost pretty; a
sentiment most people didn't say to his face or after they had seen him fight.
They both were wearing green and brown camouflage, full-body
armor. It was valuable and rare and could easily deflect a blade; could even
deflect a firearm and was extremely lightweight. Most soldiers were wearing
plate armor made from steel. This stuff was made of a composite containing
ceramic and metal. The results were much stronger and lighter plates. They also
had full helmets that completely enclosed the head and face. The visors were
brand new with motion detectors, full zoom, night vision and a host of other
functions.
Normally Maximus liked to play things by the book, but Percival
was a special case and he couldn't help but rise to the bait.
"Maybe," he responded, "but we both know you
couldn't hit anything with it. All you're good for is using a beat stick,
Lieutenant; besides, I'm a lot more important than you. People care if I get
killed; you're replaceable, expendable." It took everything he had to keep
a smile off his face.
A look of mock horror passed over the lieutenant's face.
"Not funny, Maxi, not funny. They sure wouldn't miss your winning
personality though. Are you ready to get out of this rain yet?" Percival
didn't even bother to hide his smile.
All humor drained from Maximus as he turned and glared at
Percival. "Don't call me that Percy, besides I like the rain. Do you talk
to Lord Bran that way, Lieutenant?"
Maximus shifted a little as he spoke, trying to relieve the
pressure from the arm he had been laying on. The movement only seemed to make
it tingle more.
Percival had been grinning before, but now that smile split his
face, turning it from rugged soldier back to the baby-faced, optimistic look he
managed to maintain despite years of fighting.
"You know I don't, but I might consider starting if it will
keep him from sending us out in this nightmare in the middle of winter. It's
cold enough to be snowing, Maxi. My sword is stuck in its sheath. I couldn't
get it out if I wanted to." Percival mock-tugged at the sword on his belt.
"See, completely stuck. We better trade spots."
Maximus glanced at Percival's sword then at the giant ax
strapped to his back. I don't think I've ever seen him draw his sword
anyway. It was Maximus' turn to smile this time, although it was more of a
predatory grin than anything he would share with a friend. "It's alright,
Lieutenant, we all know you'll be hiding once the fighting starts anyway."
Percival shrugged at Maximus then turned his head to stare at
the river. Maximus waited for him to make some kind of comeback, and at first
thought Percival had conceded the argument. Percival started to whistle and
Maximus had to strain his ears to pick up the tune. He instantly recognized it
once he heard a couple notes. It was a song about the events that had given
Blood River its current name. This one happened to be about a cowardly captain
who had abandoned his men on the eve of battle and the lieutenant who had taken
over and rallied the men to victory.
Maximus snorted and turned away to hide the smile on his face.
He had been upset about the current mission, thinking about scrubbing it before
Percival came out here. Somehow, like always, Percival had been able to read
his mood and turn it around. They had been friends for a long time and while
Percival had never shown any inclination to lead, Maximus suspected he would
make a damn good captain. Continuing to look out towards the rushing river,
Maximus decided to get to the point. "Do you have a reason for wasting my
time, Lieutenant?"
Percival sighed and the smile died from his face. "Targets
sighted; they turned the bend about five minutes ago." Percival pointed
south down the length of the river. "They should be here in about fifteen.
No signs they spotted us."
Finally. Maximus nodded as he listened
to Percy, his mind focusing on the reason they were out here in the first
place. "Packages?" he asked as he glanced back at Percival.
Percival squinted into the distance, a habit he had when he had
a mixed opinion about something. "In tow, Sir, but no conformation either
way on the prime target."
Maximus noticed the slight frown on Percival's face and the
reservation in his eyes. "He will be there, Percival. Don't worry about
it. Formations?"
Percival drew his lips back and sucked on his teeth before
answering. "Staggered. Troops, packages, troops, packages… more troops.
It's not gonna be easy."
Maximus knew Percival was probing him, trying to test his
resolve. They had suffered heavy casualties their last time out and for what?
The few people they had saved had fled to their homes. Most likely to be picked
up again and sent back to the mines.
"It never is Percy," Maximus looked up into the rain. We're
here to rescue these people, but the conquerors have changed tactics on us.
Your men are good shots, but nobody is that good. "We'll have to
charge in to them. Tell Richardson, Davil, Willks and Klivos to hang back and
use their bows. Richardson and Davil will take the front of the column. Willks
and Klivos will take the back. Both pair will stay on the hill as snipers and
backup. Only clear shots. Everyone else, swords or their beat sticks of choice.
I have Alexander's guards." He glanced at Percival to gauge his reaction
and got nothing.
"I hate beat sticks," grumbled Percival, completely
ignoring the reference to Alexander.
Maximus realized Percival wasn't going to think about their
primary package until Alexander was confirmed, but Percival had good reason to
be skeptical. They had hit several prisoner convoys based on reliable
information and had failed every time. They could only hope this one would be
different. The general population and most of the army had already written
Alexander off as dead. No one had seen Alexander killed at the battle of
Valhalisa, and there was still the occasional report of someone sighting a man
matching his profile.
Maximus gave Percy a nod and a grim smile. "It's what
you're good at, Percy. We don't have a choice. We can't risk hitting any of the
prisoners." As he spoke he watched a look of trepidation grow on
Percival's face. "What's wrong?"
"What if he's not down there?" Percival sighed.
"I can't handle this. We keep hitting these convoys, and he's not there.
We lose good men every time, and the people we free don't even join us. They
run off to hide and die. Eventually the conquerors are going to start guarding
these convoys better and changing the routes. We are only going to get so many
more chances at this."
"Losing your faith?"
A rare spark of anger flashed across Percival's face.
"Never."
Percival wasn't the only one capable of manipulation. "We
aren't here just for him. We would go through with this even if we knew he
wasn't down here. It's our duty to help these people. Some of them have joined
us. Emon was worth it. Without his medical skills we would have lost a lot more
people to injury and sickness." Maximus thought of the unlikely doctor.
One of the biggest, meanest looking guys he had ever met; a giant grizzly next
to Alexander's lion frame. The man wouldn't hurt a soul. Emon spent his life
trying to help people after his sister died of the sickness when they were
kids. Maximus had even heard rumors Emon had spent time with the Sisters of
Gnaritas.
Percival shook his head. "It's our duty to kill that
murdering, traitorous scum, Novelle, and free everyone. Not just these people
here today. We can't do that on our own though. We need him or no one will
follow us."
Maximus cocked his head and looked quizzically at Percy.
"You know both their names are Novelle, right? Not to mention there's no
proof Prodis is responsible for this. I doubt Alexander would appreciate you
calling his brother a murdering, traitorous scum."
It was clear Percival was convinced Prodis was responsible and
all he gave in response was a short grunt.
"Anyway," Maximus continued, "If Alexander is
down there and we don't go in, we will have missed our best and possibly our
only chance at freeing him. We go."
Percival's face went blank as he barked out, "Yes
Sir."
The captain sighed, his breath showing in the crisp cold air.
The rain had started to let up, and it seemed the temperature had dropped
another ten degrees as the chill renewed its assault against his rain soaked
cold weather gear. "I hate it when you call me Sir. It means you disagree
with me, or you're mad at me"
Percy gave his Captain a half grin. "First, if I can't call
you Maxi and I can't call you Sir, what am I suppose to call you? Second, I do
agree with you. I just know when you need someone else to voice your inner
thoughts and help you sort things out. Lastly, I'll make sure everyone is
ready." Percival finished with his customary grin.
"I hate you sometimes, Lieutenant."
Percival shrugged and turned to pass the plans along to the rest
of the squad.
"Lieutenant."
Percival turned to face Maximus.
"Yeah Max?"
Maximus had been staring out at the river but turned back to
look at Percival. "Cut true and straight, and for God's sake man, block
well."
Percival smiled at Maximus' rare prayer and finished it for him.
"You too, Max, and Creator save us all."
It's Raining
Books Review:
"This author has a way
of making his characters come to life so that you can really get to know them
and begin to understand their reasons for doing what they are doing. He even
made the bad guys real and helped you understand them also. Sometimes I wanted
to stop reading because I had things to do, or because I wanted to prolong the
story, but I also wanted to know what was really going on and how it would end.
Then, more than halfway through the story, I found out something very
significant about this strange world and just what it really was. It made the
story even more exciting. This book has the feel of a movie with vivid
descriptions, exciting plot and a cast of interesting characters that I truly
cared about. I can't wait for the next book in the series!
I give this book a 4 flower rating."
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