BLOOD VEINS
A black wave of terror has passed over the thriving kingdom
of Larista. Mysterious invaders have swept over the land, laying waste to
everything in their path and leaving ghost towns in their wake. No one knows
where they came from and no one knows their purpose.
Tasting nothing but defeat after defeat after, the light of
hope is fading in the kingdom; but the guerilla forces resisting the invasion
have received new information. The news has provided a small glimmer that could
possibly spark into something more. Captain Maximus Rex leads a daring rescue
mission deep in the Laristan forests to save the lone surviving member of the royal
family.
Once freed, Prince Alexander Novelle, along with his friends
and comrades, face a perilous journey deep behind enemy lines. Their
destination is Castle Varanasi. The once proud Laristan capital, gateway to
heaven and salvation, lines in ruins under Dolus occupation.
Mysterious assassins, underworld savages and renegade Dolus
survivors stand between them and the answers they seek. What they find there
will shatter their perceptions and lead to unknown perils none of them are
ready to face.
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Blood
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Brian
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Maximus and Percival couldn't have
looked any different. Maximus had brown eyes and raven black hair. His face was
weathered and rugged with a distinguished long nose. A small white scar on his
left cheek marked where the tip of a sword had nearly taken his eye. Percival,
on the other hand, showed no signs of the burdens the two men had shared. He
had a smooth complexion unmarred by the usual signs of a soldier's life. Wide
eyes and a small nose framed his face. Some people said he was so handsome he
was almost pretty; a sentiment most people didn't say to his face or after they
had seen him fight.
They both were wearing green and brown
camouflage, full-body armor. It was valuable and rare and could easily deflect
a blade; could even deflect a firearm and was extremely lightweight. Most
soldiers were wearing plate armor made from steel. This stuff was made of a
composite containing ceramic and metal. The results were much stronger and
lighter plates. They also had full helmets that completely enclosed the head
and face. The visors were brand new with motion detectors, full zoom, night
vision and a host of other functions.
Normally Maximus liked to play things
by the book, but Percival was a special case and he couldn't help but rise to
the bait.
"Maybe," he responded,
"but we both know you couldn't hit anything with it. All you're good for
is using a beat stick, Lieutenant; besides, I'm a lot more important than you.
People care if I get killed; you're replaceable, expendable." It took
everything he had to keep a smile off his face.
A look of mock horror passed over the
lieutenant's face. "Not funny, Maxi, not funny. They sure wouldn't miss
your winning personality though. Are you ready to get out of this rain
yet?" Percival didn't even bother to hide his smile.
All humor drained from Maximus as he
turned and glared at Percival. "Don't call me that Percy, besides I like
the rain. Do you talk to Lord Bran that way, Lieutenant?"
Maximus shifted a little as he spoke,
trying to relieve the pressure from the arm he had been laying on. The movement
only seemed to make it tingle more.
Percival had been grinning before,
but now that smile split his face, turning it from rugged soldier back to the
baby-faced, optimistic look he managed to maintain despite years of fighting.
"You know I don't, but I might
consider starting if it will keep him from sending us out in this nightmare in
the middle of winter. It's cold enough to be snowing, Maxi. My sword is stuck
in its sheath. I couldn't get it out if I wanted to." Percival mock-tugged
at the sword on his belt. "See, completely stuck. We better trade
spots."
Maximus glanced at Percival's sword
then at the giant ax strapped to his back. I don't think I've ever seen him
draw his sword anyway. It was Maximus' turn to smile this time, although it
was more of a predatory grin than anything he would share with a friend.
"It's alright, Lieutenant, we all know you'll be hiding once the fighting
starts anyway."
Percival shrugged at Maximus then
turned his head to stare at the river. Maximus waited for him to make some kind
of comeback, and at first thought Percival had conceded the argument. Percival
started to whistle and Maximus had to strain his ears to pick up the tune. He
instantly recognized it once he heard a couple notes. It was a song about the
events that had given Blood River its current name. This one happened to be
about a cowardly captain who had abandoned his men on the eve of battle and the
lieutenant who had taken over and rallied the men to victory.
Maximus snorted and turned away to
hide the smile on his face. He had been upset about the current mission,
thinking about scrubbing it before Percival came out here. Somehow, like
always, Percival had been able to read his mood and turn it around. They had
been friends for a long time and while Percival had never shown any inclination
to lead, Maximus suspected he would make a damn good captain. Continuing to
look out towards the rushing river, Maximus decided to get to the point.
"Do you have a reason for wasting my time, Lieutenant?"
Percival sighed and the smile died
from his face. "Targets sighted; they turned the bend about five minutes
ago." Percival pointed south down the length of the river. "They
should be here in about fifteen. No signs they spotted us."
Finally. Maximus nodded as he listened to
Percy, his mind focusing on the reason they were out here in the first place.
"Packages?" he asked as he glanced back at Percival.
Percival squinted into the distance,
a habit he had when he had a mixed opinion about something. "In tow, Sir,
but no conformation either way on the prime target."
Maximus noticed the slight frown on
Percival's face and the reservation in his eyes. "He will be there,
Percival. Don't worry about it. Formations?"
Percival drew his lips back and
sucked on his teeth before answering. "Staggered. Troops, packages,
troops, packages… more troops. It's not gonna be easy."
Maximus knew Percival was probing
him, trying to test his resolve. They had suffered heavy casualties their last
time out and for what? The few people they had saved had fled to their homes.
Most likely to be picked up again and sent back to the mines.
"It never is Percy,"
Maximus looked up into the rain. We're here to rescue these people, but the
conquerors have changed tactics on us. Your men are good shots, but nobody is
that good. "We'll have to charge in to them. Tell Richardson, Davil,
Willks and Klivos to hang back and use their bows. Richardson and Davil will
take the front of the column. Willks and Klivos will take the back. Both pair
will stay on the hill as snipers and backup. Only clear shots. Everyone else,
swords or their beat sticks of choice. I have Alexander's guards." He
glanced at Percival to gauge his reaction and got nothing.
"I hate beat sticks,"
grumbled Percival, completely ignoring the reference to Alexander.
Maximus realized Percival wasn't
going to think about their primary package until Alexander was confirmed, but
Percival had good reason to be skeptical. They had hit several prisoner convoys
based on reliable information and had failed every time. They could only hope
this one would be different. The general population and most of the army had
already written Alexander off as dead. No one had seen Alexander killed at the
battle of Valhalisa, and there was still the occasional report of someone
sighting a man matching his profile.
Maximus gave Percy a nod and a grim
smile. "It's what you're good at, Percy. We don't have a choice. We can't
risk hitting any of the prisoners." As he spoke he watched a look of
trepidation grow on Percival's face. "What's wrong?"
"What if he's not down
there?" Percival sighed. "I can't handle this. We keep hitting these
convoys, and he's not there. We lose good men every time, and the people we
free don't even join us. They run off to hide and die. Eventually the
conquerors are going to start guarding these convoys better and changing the
routes. We are only going to get so many more chances at this."
"Losing your faith?"
A rare spark of anger flashed across
Percival's face. "Never."
Percival wasn't the only one capable
of manipulation. "We aren't here just for him. We would go through with
this even if we knew he wasn't down here. It's our duty to help these people.
Some of them have joined us. Emon was worth it. Without his medical skills we
would have lost a lot more people to injury and sickness." Maximus thought
of the unlikely doctor. One of the biggest, meanest looking guys he had ever
met; a giant grizzly next to Alexander's lion frame. The man wouldn't hurt a
soul. Emon spent his life trying to help people after his sister died of the
sickness when they were kids. Maximus had even heard rumors Emon had spent time
with the Sisters of Gnaritas.
Percival shook his head. "It's
our duty to kill that murdering, traitorous scum, Novelle, and free everyone.
Not just these people here today. We can't do that on our own though. We need
him or no one will follow us."
Maximus cocked his head and looked
quizzically at Percy. "You know both their names are Novelle, right? Not
to mention there's no proof Prodis is responsible for this. I doubt Alexander
would appreciate you calling his brother a murdering, traitorous scum."
It was clear Percival was convinced
Prodis was responsible and all he gave in response was a short grunt.
"Anyway," Maximus
continued, "If Alexander is down there and we don't go in, we will have
missed our best and possibly our only chance at freeing him. We go."
Percival's face went blank as he
barked out, "Yes Sir."
The captain sighed, his breath
showing in the crisp cold air. The rain had started to let up, and it seemed
the temperature had dropped another ten degrees as the chill renewed its
assault against his rain soaked cold weather gear. "I hate it when you
call me Sir. It means you disagree with me, or you're mad at me"
Percy gave his Captain a half grin.
"First, if I can't call you Maxi and I can't call you Sir, what am I
suppose to call you? Second, I do agree with you. I just know when you need
someone else to voice your inner thoughts and help you sort things out. Lastly,
I'll make sure everyone is ready." Percival finished with his customary
grin.
"I hate you sometimes,
Lieutenant."
Percival shrugged and turned to pass
the plans along to the rest of the squad.
"Lieutenant."
Percival turned
to face Maximus. "Yeah Max?"
Maximus had been staring out at the
river but turned back to look at Percival. "Cut true and straight, and for
God's sake man, block well."
Percival smiled at Maximus' rare
prayer and finished it for him. "You too, Max, and Creator save us
all."
It's Raining Books Review:
"This
author has a way of making his characters come to life so that you can really
get to know them and begin to understand their reasons for doing what they are
doing. He even made the bad guys real and helped you understand them also.
Sometimes I wanted to stop reading because I had things to do, or because I wanted
to prolong the story, but I also wanted to know what was really going on and
how it would end.
Then, more than halfway through the story, I found out something very significant about this strange world and just what it really was. It made the story even more exciting. This book has the feel of a movie with vivid descriptions, exciting plot and a cast of interesting characters that I truly cared about. I can't wait for the next book in the series!
I give this book a 4 flower rating."
Then, more than halfway through the story, I found out something very significant about this strange world and just what it really was. It made the story even more exciting. This book has the feel of a movie with vivid descriptions, exciting plot and a cast of interesting characters that I truly cared about. I can't wait for the next book in the series!
I give this book a 4 flower rating."
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